This is a very lovely and well written poem. You made sure to include different memories from your life. I especially love how you added some humor to the poem but also "touching" words. When the adults in your life have said, "You have to" and "It's for your good" really made you to the person you are today. You do things because you know it'll be for your own good. There's many things that I like about the poem and this really shows the person you are. When people write poetry, their readers can tell what kind of person you are. Fantastic job! ps: cutie ◕ ◡ ◕
I like that you put a picture of the blackberry bush, do you still pick them sometimes?
ReplyDeleteThis is a very lovely and well written poem. You made sure to include different memories from your life. I especially love how you added some humor to the poem but also "touching" words. When the adults in your life have said, "You have to" and "It's for your good" really made you to the person you are today. You do things because you know it'll be for your own good. There's many things that I like about the poem and this really shows the person you are. When people write poetry, their readers can tell what kind of person you are. Fantastic job!
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