Your nonsense poem is great because it includes a lot of poetic devices. The form that you used the devices made the poem very interesting and your nonsense words made sense. This poem has such a great plot that it should be turned into a modern fairy tale. The word Peruge reminded me of the Emerald City from the Wizard of Oz. Great Poem!
Oooh, I see you used Mycroft. I didn't know you were a fan of Sherlock Holmes ;D It's interesting because the definition has a eerie similarity to what the real Mycroft does.
I liked your poem! It was really interested in your nonsense words. They were made up and they made me think about what the poem was about. I also liked how you gave a visual for the key as well. Good job!
Your nonsense poem is great because it includes a lot of poetic devices. The form that you used the devices made the poem very interesting and your nonsense words made sense. This poem has such a great plot that it should be turned into a modern fairy tale. The word Peruge reminded me of the Emerald City from the Wizard of Oz. Great Poem!
ReplyDeleteOooh, I see you used Mycroft. I didn't know you were a fan of Sherlock Holmes ;D It's interesting because the definition has a eerie similarity to what the real Mycroft does.
ReplyDeleteI also just noticed Cumberbatch and Johnlock, you might have earned my vote!
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ReplyDeleteI liked your poem! It was really interested in your nonsense words. They were made up and they made me think about what the poem was about. I also liked how you gave a visual for the key as well. Good job!
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